Monday, July 21, 2008

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I liked the coming darkness
The way it creeps up
Enclosing you
Wrapping you like a blanket
Lights shine in the distance
The mood overhead
You sit there waiting
For something to stir.

An animal scurrying along
An owl hooting somewhere not too far off
And two teenage girls sitting on top of the world
Telling their stories of vacations
Talking about everything they can
Waiting to get wrapped into that dark blue blanket.

4 comments:

Mara Kate said...

Very good i liked how you wrote about the darkness enclosing around you like a blanket i love that simile. it's wonderful plz comment my stuff thanks :)))

eMmA said...

i love this! it is cool way to show darkness can be "your friend"

i like the last couple lines.

Maddie said...

thnx!!!!!!!!!!

Lauren said...

i enjoyed reading it a lot!!! good detail!