Saturday, August 29, 2009

that feeling...

that feeling...

when everything explodes.
when your eyes well up,
and your throat closes.

that feeling....

where you want to whisper their name.
when you need a friend,
and a hug more than anything.

that feeling....

when you know they've won.
when you can feel your life slipping,
and it slides right out of your hands

that feeling...

when you know it went wrong.
when you feel like losing hope,
and you know it's all done.

that feeling.

12 comments:

Unknown said...

this is exactly how i'm feeling omg we share a heart =) some of the words needed to be met by a thesaurus so that it could flow a bit better but hey =) it's 1 sumting in the morning soo it's understandable

Bela said...

uh ohhh...is somebody in love? :)

Maddie said...

haha mara... yes. our heart is definately shared <3 haha yes... i can edit and revise a little, but you are right. it was latee :D

and bells... idk if i fell in love. but ill tell you whenn i tlk to u... k?

Mackenzie said...

hah it feels like today for u my dear lol but good good...idk y but i tend to repeat words...its wierd

Maddie said...

hahaha it was fromm like a week ago.... but yeaaaaa. no... today isnt as depressing :)

Mackenzie said...

ooo rly cuz it sounds like it was...i mean a day without me is certainly not a happy day...lol

Gina said...

Hmm...if you want me to write dozens of comments on your blog, you better let me in on some of this, otherwise I will have nothing to talk about! Haha.

Maddie said...

hahaha okayy gina :) i am appreciating the dozens of comments.... how about this. can you email me, and i will tell you everything that happened. i just want to make sure that not everyone in the world knws :D

Gina said...

Okay, just sent you an email...delete away!

WORD VERIFICATION: fulner
You should write a story about a boy named Tobias Fulner and post it on the old CWP blog. I'll do the same if you agree and we'll compare stories, okay?

Gina said...

And everyone needs to visit thesoundbites.blogspot.com!

Aren't you still listed as one of the contributors? I think you might be...keep your ears open! We recently got some really hilarious ones :) Oh, the entertainment qualities of radiology...*sigh*

Gina said...

Officially a dozen comments :) Btw, it seems I am now being BLOCKED from shywd, one of my former favorite blogs!! Do you still read it? I want to get an invitation to join but sadly do not remember the email address for shywd...sort of defeats the purpose of the site, you know? :P

Maddie said...

hahahaha okayy i emailed you! and i will play with that story!!!! so your on! hahaha ohhh goshh im scareddd now! and i will visitt yourr blog! i promise! anddd yea... i need an invitation too! goshhh darnnn it! i even still follow that blog... :(