i'm told that life is a whirlwind
to live every moment that you have
i've tried to listen, but will things really change?
i've looked back to my past
and have realized how fast it's gone
how my sister used to be one
but now she's six without any time gone.
it's like my life goes from slow to fast motion
0 to 60 with just a little push on the pedal
for seconds can pass in minutes
and life can just go too slow
but when i reflect,
it's like a day had passed in a minute.
my life will go second by second,
or appear in year by year
i'll try to live it up
but life passes too fast to live up every tear.
5 comments:
This is good! It shows that you are aware of everything around you! But you rhymed gone with gone. Fix it please! Otherwise, nice job!
i rhymed? oh, i see what you mean. i wasn't tryign to rhyme at all, i just wrote it out. i'll think of some alternatives maybe, but i think that i'm keeping this one the same.
hmmm this is interesting, i agree with bela about how ur aware of everything around u and i also think that ur sort of sad that ur growing up and that things have flown by so fast
well, do u feel like ur life went by fast, or very slowly. can you remember details of life 2 years ago???
In a word - yes.
Kidding, kidding! But you're right...the world can fly by us. And we're all too busy living to stop and watch the beauty of it all, and admire what we have. :)
I know, I can be deep.
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