You know, I really love writing. This is how I get through bad things, and sometimes when I can feel my happiest. Please read, comment, and hopefully enjoy. Because life is beautiful even if it seems to go by too fast.
Monday, July 21, 2008
The Curtain Opens
The lights dim The crowd hushes Music starts playing There’s electricity in the air We all anxiously stare Waiting to see the first human The is the sorority house There is Serena, Margot and Pilar.
2 comments:
i think it needs something more...
like instead of just saying right out that it is the sorority house, describe it and serena, etc.
okay. i just kinda wrote it really fast.
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